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i.
She sits all alone by the sea
before the empty stretch;
whispered winds wandering through,
without any hope
of a realisation.

ii.
The hush of skin on skin,
such submission in her posture
to shimmy past boulders and pebbles alike
into the vast emptiness --
what a wonderful death it is. To drown.

iii.
Wooden clunk of boats
rocking against the gentle, rippling tides;
brightly painted sides
and glowing edges
and well-ripened lichen and a lining of barnacles
which soothes the onrushing memories.

iv.
Gravel-like hiss of sand on the
sloping route up wooden stairs,
creaky, crumbling boathouse;
faded outlook under grey-blue clouds:
your ship doesn't pass by this place any more.

v.
Maybe that's why these shoes hang,
odd pair as they are,
in these nooses
underneath the water
facing that clear, heavy sky
where we used to walk,
the sun and I.
Thank you all so much for a second DLD, I am indeed rendered speechless! - 06.11.12
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012   General Artist
Congratulations on the DLD, dear one:heart:
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91816119 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012   Writer
Thank you, honey! How are you keeping? :hug:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012   General Artist
You're most welcome:heart:
Going loco over my excessive failure at accomplishing NaNo,
but other than that, I'm all good. You?
:huggle:
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91816119 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012   Writer
I'm in quite the same boat. I've already known that I'm not going to make the whole 50, but that I'll do my best. :)
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012   General Artist
That's the spirit! I'll start thinking your way too, thank you! :heart:
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91816119 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012   Writer
It'll be us against the 50k, eh? :giggle:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012   General Artist
That's right! :iconeyeofthetigerplz:
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91816119 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012   Writer
:lmao:
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doublethefun Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Amazing work. Your diction is so rich; I can see you chose every word meticulously, and it paid off.
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91816119 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012   Writer
Thank you so much, I'm glad the effort I put in showed. :heart:
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